Ugly

A poem about suicide

 I stand on the beach sand looking at the brightening sun.
People look at me like I’m an ugly beast.
It seem like everyday they stared at me all frightened.
They see my eyes all red,
Sometimes they wish I was dead.
Why are they scared of me?
They circle around  in front of me, as I stared at the sky.
They see my tears as I start to cry.
In their thoughts they are calling me ugly.
I give them their wish for me to die,
 I pull out my gun and shoot my head while I cry.

Author's Note

Sorry I'm just very depressed, but don't worry I wont kill myself. I have my whole life a head.

Listen to this sad music while you read the poem. :(

Reviews

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

The loneliness and pain, rejection is powerful here Horrormaster. The music to me is not sad..it is meditative and cool...it all depends who is listening to the music I guess. Horrormonster if you wait for others to begin to appreciate you for you to appreciate who you are.."God's work of art" it may never come.....however you can begin just a little, I mean real little to appreciate who you are as a human being....then you will be amazed how slowly others will begin to apprecciate you....just my humble thoughts..

courage and blessings on this Easter Sunday
My prayers are with you!

Vincent

[Frantzuu]

This is a great piece, dude you did a great job, what better way to express your depression than through a stunning piece of poetry, respect!!!

[James Watts]

Sad it is. But trust me I know all about depression. My thing is don't let depression get you down but instead use it as the fuel needed to pick yourself back up. Nice work on this.

[Levioshock]

Very sad yet amazing

[NeverSurrender]

Very sad poem. Almost everybody feels depressed sometimes and often only that person himself can get things straight.
The picture fit the poem perfectly.

love,

N.S.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought it was good. You shouldn't let others bring you down. Also you shouldn't care what other people think of you. I am learning that the hard way. It is because of someone I really dislike at this point, but this is a great write. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is amazing. Took me from from being pissed off to blowing his head off. You can write a story. Always a surprise to what you write. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Frifthor (D^2)]

Hey man I just logged on, and your not the only one who goes through these things. It's horrible subject to write about, but as one known to frequent it, we all know sometimes its necessary to get it off our chests. Just remember, you may be depressed for a while, but we all work our way out of it eventually. I've done it, I've had friends who done, and I'm sure you'll make it out eventually. Just hang in there.