Fear

Warning: This poem is super scary. It's about a ghost in a hospital

As I stand alone in this hospital,
I look at myself in a mirror nothing but skin and bones.
I remember being so old,
I feel so cold and lonely.
Why am I here?
I walk in the dark hallway calling for nurses.
“Help! Help!”
Nurses fear me as they can’t see me,
They hear me calling, “Help! Help!” again.
I went near them as they pass me.
What is wrong with me?
Why do I fear them?
Am I dead?
I remember my head bleeding,
As I lay down in my bed.
What happen to me?
Why every time I see them, they can’t see me?
I see demons coming for me,
Some of them want to drag me in hell for all eternity.
I hide in this man room in the hospital,
I see him laying on his side.
I started to fade away,

Before more people will fear me in this day.

Author's Note

This poem also give me the chills when I wrote it. How about you?

Reviews

[Bette]

"I went near them as they passes me" did you mean pass me?
I see demons coming from me," from me or for? i think it would work better as for because the next line you state that they are coming for your soul, if they are coming from you then they already had it. just suggestions if you don't agree then disregard. :) other then those two things i liked the poem, your imagery is great as always. great job!

[Sean M. Addams]

really cool pic and i thought the poem turned out well ..like the creepiness to it alot..

[Star Wolf]

This is chilling and so is that picture!

[Tina Kline]

Chilling and rather tragic at the same time. I really like it, great write!

[An owl on the moon]

A powerful, visually stirring write that is filled with such an essence of life, death, and the hereafter. Excellent!

[Rogelio Chavez]

Good poem. it did give me the chills

[The Water Queen]

Love how the person seems to start to realize things. This poem is great.

--The Angel of the Earth--