Fear

Warning: This poem is super scary. It's about a ghost in a hospital

As I stand alone in this hospital,
I look at myself in a mirror nothing but skin and bones.
I remember being so old,
I feel so cold and lonely.
Why am I here?
I walk in the dark hallway calling for nurses.
“Help! Help!”
Nurses fear me as they can’t see me,
They hear me calling, “Help! Help!” again.
I went near them as they pass me.
What is wrong with me?
Why do I fear them?
Am I dead?
I remember my head bleeding,
As I lay down in my bed.
What happen to me?
Why every time I see them, they can’t see me?
I see demons coming for me,
Some of them want to drag me in hell for all eternity.
I hide in this man room in the hospital,
I see him laying on his side.
I started to fade away,

Before more people will fear me in this day.

Author's Note

This poem also give me the chills when I wrote it. How about you?

Reviews

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

That picture seriously makes me want to crawl under my bed and cry.

The poem itself was quite eere, I agree. It leaves me with a lingering feeling of the creeps. :)
Fantasic.

[Deanarrlack]

I like this.

[Sexkitten]

Absolutely creepy. But I love it. :)

[RosylnPeaches]

Gives off a good sense of isolation. Small grammar errors but overall it's good :).

[Shalini Dinesh]

creepy poem, if i really see ghost i would just faint over there... anyways a good poem, a good entertainer!

[James Watts]

This was a nice little poem. Creepy. I enjoyed it very much.

[JenLyn]

This is an eerie piece and I love dark writing not to mention the paranormal. Very creative and original, kudos! I'm looking forward to reading more of you writing. Great write! Keep it up! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. Would be hell to be a ghost. I like the photo. Made the poem come alive. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Haifa]

oh man.. this is really scary and I am not joking, you even chose the right picture for your poem owww what can I say.. anyway, well done, good poem

[clemon73]

good job, i liked it.