Leave me alone

A poem about mean friends don't want to get to know you and be your friend.

Everyday it’s always the same,
I came to them trying to be friends with them.
They look at me like a demon of fear,
I shall spare their lives of friendship.
They always say leave me alone,
For what? Hate, fear. F**k all of them that is coming near to me saying that.
Give me a chance, get to know me.
It makes sad when they say those words,
Leave me alone.
I hope they are all glad as I stand alone with shyness.

Reviews

[MissWordSmith]

so emotional. made me really sad. and so true. i think we all go through this at one point or another. its upto to us to be strong and remember that we should never change just because ''we don't fit it''

A really exceptional write. only suggestion is check your grammar.

[Fallen Angel]

wow really emotional piece. I think you are carrying a important message over.

[smiley:)]

This is very deep, I know a couple of people like this who have done mistakes and every looks at them/you in fear, it's not fair toward's the people who make mistakes, everyone makes them, everyone sins. People can be judgemental and hurtful, but, it's better just to be yourself even if people don't like you. Someday when you are more succesful then them, they'll realize that they shouldn't have judged you. They shouldn't have underestimated you.
P.S. Language.... Write it, just don't write the bad kind.

~Smiley :)

[deeps]

This is an emotional write here. Sad and very well written

[Sean M. Addams]

very deep and sad piece.. to those who don't give everyone a chance i think or closed minded and usually not worth the time of day..nice job

[Ice QueenJen]

I have felt like this many times and so can relate too. I find myself alone most of the time- so I to will be your friend. It was a great poem too.

[QuietPoet]

Those people are missing out on someone great. Its their loss. I can relate to this. Ill be your friend. Great write.

[Tina Kline]

A very hurtful experience, one that can leave lasting scars. You did a wonderful job expressing those feelings here.

[Hippy]

yeah man i liked this peice and screw people man i feel everyone should reach out and communicate there is so much to be learned from other people

[clemon73]

Great use of emotions, you speak from the heart and you can't go wrong. Nice job.

[Bette]

this is sad well done.