Leave me alone

A poem about mean friends don't want to get to know you and be your friend.

Everyday it’s always the same,
I came to them trying to be friends with them.
They look at me like a demon of fear,
I shall spare their lives of friendship.
They always say leave me alone,
For what? Hate, fear. F**k all of them that is coming near to me saying that.
Give me a chance, get to know me.
It makes sad when they say those words,
Leave me alone.
I hope they are all glad as I stand alone with shyness.

Reviews

[MissWordSmith]

so emotional. made me really sad. and so true. i think we all go through this at one point or another. its upto to us to be strong and remember that we should never change just because ''we don't fit it''

A really exceptional write. only suggestion is check your grammar.

[M.Kilani]

not bad at all , it would've been better , Read a poem called "The massacre of my friends" or just follow the link http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Kilani/525095/

[I Am Svetlana]

Very well done, I'm proud of every bit of emotion here. This is a common thing for friends to go through...people who judge you and then try to be your friend...and then never give you the time of day to get to know you...it's quite common...and people are selfish

[Rogelio Chavez]

WOw good poem. It was really emotional.

[Haifa]

oh its so sad... but well done

[Obscure Meaning]

Such a great poem of conflict, wanting to be accepted 'give me a chance' yet then resisting friendship after having such bad experiences with friendship before 'leave me alone'. Or at least thats what it means to me!
thanks for sharing master :D

Obscureness out

[TamiViolet]

I've been there as well as most of us.... The aspect of being 'shy'... is wonderful... It sounds like you're in pain, and I hope I'm wrong.... Hey! Shy people have it going on!!! :-)

Profound work, my new friend...

[Star Wolf]

There seems to be no end to people like that. They've always been here and sadly always will be.

[Eric Cox]

I know what it's like to be shy. Very nice pen on this poem.

[Frantzuu]

great, piece a lot is said in this short poem. Great job :D