My Dark Life

A dark poem of a broken heart.

When I'm crying
I can feel my life slowly dying
My life falls deeper into this darkness
All I feel is sadness and pain
When I'm dreaming
I see the demons watching me
They want my soul for all eternity
All they do is treat me like s**t
I can feel nothing
All I feel is insufferable pain
I feel as if I'm losing my head
Sometimes I wish I was dead
I want my dark life to fade away
So I can have a happy life to this day.

Reviews

[The Water Queen]

Very deep and depressing write. Great poem.

[Tina Kline]

This is very expressive in the hurt that you felt at losing someone. I love the way you described the pain, I think you did an outstanding job on this.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

It is deep, but it is still good. It was very expressive. Thanks for sharing with me. :)

[Sean M. Addams]

a very deep piece ... and very well expressed... losing someone is hard but someone better is right around the corner... nice work!!!

[QuietPoet]

Another sad piece from you. You leaked your feelings out in this one. Nice expression and emotions. One day all of it will go away, you'll find your inner happiness. Just look around, its all around you.

[Poetic Beauty]

I think many times we feel like this in life. The imagery is great.