Darkness

A Poem by HorrorMaster

One of my old dark poem. I wrote this one because one of my ex girlfriend was being mean to me.

I am in the chamber of darkness
The demons torture me with sadness
I see nothing but tears going down my face
They're taking me a way from this earth with out a trace
Everyday I feel nothing but insufferable pain
Even though its not the same
They came to take me a way
In this darkness I should stay

© 2010 HorrorMaster

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Bette

this is great! but i would change" traces"to "with out a trace". other than that. well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

QuietPoet

Amazing. Don't stay in the darkness, you'll just stay dark. Great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

Great poem. The only thing I would change is the last line would sound better you used the word In instead of where.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on March 5, 2010
Last Updated on March 6, 2010
Tags: Depression

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HorrorMaster

Tamarac, FL

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Hello i'm Ira and i'm pretty much a horror writer. I have bad grammar and spelling or typos errors, but I tried my best, so please enjoy them. Also I don't like harsh grammar nazi saying (oh yo.. more..