My Dark Heart

A dark short poem coming from after a heart broken

As the cold stone drives down into my heart,
I feel the blackness tearing me apart.
As my tears goes down to my face,
My heart dies down to all human race.
I thought I will love forever,
Now it will never be the same.
As my dark heart closest me,
I will lay in the dust for all eternity. 

Author's Note

Cheer me up

Reviews

[AWSklavos]

Well, you are an alchemist of sorts. You turned that heart ache and emotion into golden poetry. Thank you for sharing your work.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this poem. I feel bad that your heart was broken. I'm sorry for what happens to people.

[r]

broken hearts are a hard thing to deal with... but nicley written... i feel the emotion flowing thru the piece

[The Water Queen]

It seems to show such a tragic death caused by heart ache that it makes you cry out and wish the speaker wasnt dying from the shear pain that he is feeling. Good job!!

--The Angel of the Earth--

[Eric Cox]

A sad period of time captured creatively. A nicely penned poem.

[Tina Kline]

Very tragic and very nicely written. The pain in this flows outward, fantastic job on this one too.

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Not bad. You've got a good structure and rhyme scheme going. It kind of flowed, but I think it could be better. As for content, I think you did a great job in describing your feelings. Nice job!

Ironically Yours, Blade 3 Blood

[123456789]

I like this! Nice job!

[QuietPoet]

I liked this, but so sad. You expressed yourself in so little words. A broken heart can be healed, just give time for it to relax. Nicely done :)

[Sean M. Addams]

i like the dark and deep tone of this piece..overall nice job on this..a very cool write..