My Life Inside A Graveyard.

Ever wonder how it feels like to live inside a graveyard.

When I woke up it was dark,
my eyes were covered with bugs.
I couldn’t see everything.
I feel flies clawing into my skin,
my skin turns into a rotten corpse.
All my life were gone,
my heart stopped like a dead drum.
I need to get out of here.
I feel fear and frighten that I need to go somewhere.
I need food, human flesh food were I can eat all the blood and guts.
I can’t smell, I can’t see.
I feel my head bleeding down to my knee.
I feel dirt and wood.
I wish I would get out of here,
only if I could dig my way out of here.
I wont give up, never give up.
I most be strong to used my rotten fingers to break this wood where I am laying on.
I break, and I break this living piece of coffin.
I pull myself outside of this dirt.
As my life in a graveyard will never be forgotten.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

That was really cool. You're very descriptive in this piece, so much that I felt myself as the speaker. Once again, great imagery and great content. I don't I've read anything like it.

Ironically Yours, Blade 3 Blood

[starskey95]

a great horror piece keep up the good work

[The Water Queen]

i love the dark imagery you gave me. great work

[Sean M. Addams]

very cool piece... liked the dark imagery in this one alot... overall a very gross but impressive piece

[Eric Cox]

Excellent horror imagery. A nicely penned horror poem.

[QuietPoet]

This was creepy and so well written. I never really pictured myself in a graveyard that way, but I def would not go at night, lol Great job :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I love that this poem is about a zombie. I love things on the dark side but it has to be paranormal. I don't like the typical slasher stuff but I love ghost goblins demons, vamps.and so on. I could picture a grayish/green zombies with holes for eyes pounding on the lid of the coffin that was slowly chiseling away finally breaking into pieces. This was like watching a horror movie instead of reading a poem. I didn't notice the flow or the rhythm for I was seeing the scene splayed out before my eyes. Great job.

[Hippy]

very nice i am a huge zombie fan and i always wandered how that part went down and always had a similar image good job with the description though i do feel it breaks from its rythem a few times

[untoldtruth]

gives me the heebijeebies :D awesome! can't think of a better way to describe waking up in your coffin and trying to get out *shivers*

[Allison]

This is really creepy and pretty well written. Sometimes it seemed kind of stiff and forced, though.

Overall, really good.