My Life Inside A Graveyard.

Ever wonder how it feels like to live inside a graveyard.

When I woke up it was dark,
my eyes were covered with bugs.
I couldn’t see everything.
I feel flies clawing into my skin,
my skin turns into a rotten corpse.
All my life were gone,
my heart stopped like a dead drum.
I need to get out of here.
I feel fear and frighten that I need to go somewhere.
I need food, human flesh food were I can eat all the blood and guts.
I can’t smell, I can’t see.
I feel my head bleeding down to my knee.
I feel dirt and wood.
I wish I would get out of here,
only if I could dig my way out of here.
I wont give up, never give up.
I most be strong to used my rotten fingers to break this wood where I am laying on.
I break, and I break this living piece of coffin.
I pull myself outside of this dirt.
As my life in a graveyard will never be forgotten.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[r]

nice... and yes i do wonder what that would be like

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Aww it was good. :)
Thanks for sharing.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Scary. This poem freaked me out. I have been disappointed with horror films lately. Writers like you really give me a thrill.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

love the imagery

[Rogelio Chavez]

Very good poem. Nice description.

[The Analog Kid]

Nice and creepy. I see a slight resemblence in a few lines to Poe!

[Frantzuu]

Nice description there, awesome :D

[. o O (Deepest_Thoughts..]

Nice description and overall good poem. It just doesn't seem to flow as well as I think it could. Some words may need to be replaced to make a bit more sense but still good :)

[brownie]

Great details and an overall great poem.
It seems that (so far) your strongest writings are in poems.

[Tina Kline]

Fantastic description, I could just see all of the action so vividly! Very well written poem too!