My Life Inside A Graveyard.

Ever wonder how it feels like to live inside a graveyard.

When I woke up it was dark,
my eyes were covered with bugs.
I couldn’t see everything.
I feel flies clawing into my skin,
my skin turns into a rotten corpse.
All my life were gone,
my heart stopped like a dead drum.
I need to get out of here.
I feel fear and frighten that I need to go somewhere.
I need food, human flesh food were I can eat all the blood and guts.
I can’t smell, I can’t see.
I feel my head bleeding down to my knee.
I feel dirt and wood.
I wish I would get out of here,
only if I could dig my way out of here.
I wont give up, never give up.
I most be strong to used my rotten fingers to break this wood where I am laying on.
I break, and I break this living piece of coffin.
I pull myself outside of this dirt.
As my life in a graveyard will never be forgotten.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Lorraine]

Aside from the few minor grammatical mistakes, it makes a pretty interesting piece. The graphic imagery reminds me of the old horror movies I watched when I was young. Nice Poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Ice QueenJen]

I love it, and gives you a visual of what a dead person who becomes a zombie and wanting to get out of his grave feels!

[snopadelic]

I'm not a big poetry fan, however i liked this but i can't really offer any advice. Good though

[Matthew Kult]

Well done.

Regards,

Matthew

[Coyote Poetry]

Not a good place to wake up is the graveyard. It mean you are dead or you had a very bad day. A short poem with a very good story.
Coyote

[Blake Blackstone]

I liked it. It kind of tells how a zombie is scared when it's first awaken in it's coffin and frantically tries to claw it's way up to eat... Give them more of a personality rather than just a walking corpse.

[Dutch Jr.]

Wow, very interesting writing you have here. This was a nice read.

[Vito XYZ]

cool....

[Shalini Dinesh]

oh my god, am scared.... i'm usually scared or feel kind of uneasy when talks like ghosts or graveyards are concerned.. anyways your poem was good... good enough to get out the right feel

[The Master of Fright]

Really creepy. Your description was great. I loved the idea, and overall, it was terrific. I liked it, and thought it was a great read.