A Vampire's Dream

A young man dream about a fetish rave club filled with vampires

It was a dark stormy night in the small town of Cooper. A Gothic man named Maven slept in his bed, dreaming about a cold, dark rave club buried deep beneath the Smart Mall shopping center. The club, packed wall to wall with reveling vampires, contained several fetish chambers where all kinds of bizarre and ancient rituals were taking place. Vampires gorged on fresh blood from their victim's necks. The vampires took pleasure in their feeding. Everyone in the club was raving to this dark rave song called Melodies of the dead by Amdusica and taking ecstasy. Maven couldn't believe where he was at. He must be having a beautiful dream. He always wanted to be a real vampire ever since he was a little kid. A beautiful woman with long hair the color of coal, wearing a black fishnet shirt combined with a skirt, came up to him. She asks him if he wants to join her in her pleasure chamber.

"Well hello, sexy thing. Will you join me in my chamber? I'll make your life wild."

Maven smiles at her and said, "Hell yes I’ll join you."

She grabbed his hand and led him into a dark chamber room were he could have all the pleasure he wants. She starts to play this dark rave/black metal song called le son de la pluie by Tamtrum. Then she takes a ball gag and puts it in Maven's mouth. For Maven, screaming was no longer an option. She takes off his clothes and takes pleasure in slowly whipping him. She whipped his back so hard his blood splattered out everywhere. She starts to lick it as he sat there enjoying every agony-filled second. The women came up to him, her fangs were growing out sharp as daggers. She starts to bite his neck very hard, so she can enjoy the taste of his blood while sucking him.

Maven started to get weaker and weaker. His eyes were becoming black and red. His skin was getting cold as ice and white as snow. He transforms into one of them. Maven and his beautiful women were having torture fetish sex. Maven takes her arm and slices it, so he can drink more blood. She moan in pleasure. Maven more slowly moves towards her neck and starts to suck out all the blood so he can get stronger.

Now the rave club was about to close and it was sunlight. Everyone started to disappear into the darkness, but not him. He starred at the window and the sun coming to him, as Maven and his beautiful women both turned into dust.

That’s when Maven woke up and realized that it was just his vampire dream.

Author's Note

Don't be harsh please comment it. :)

Theme song for this story

Reviews

[Calypso]

Crazy good. Loved it.

[Loner]

U are a magician Horror master can i hug u?

[chaffy]

woah, it's beautiful.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I loved it because it was amazing. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing this with me. :)

[Kyle]

Yay! Vampireeesss ^-^ Oh and I like how you wrote it too, and the ending was the best nice twist to it :)

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

vampires , awesome!!

[Star Wolf]

Fantastic vamp story. It could easily be longer but is pretty nice as it is too.

[Eric Cox]

Very cool vampire story. Great imagery in this. A very cool and creative write.

[clemon73]

great story. I agree more detail. Name the club, could have a cool vampire theme. Detail on the bizarre and ancient rituals, what were they doing? Anyways, i really liked it. Just though you could bring it home with more detail.

[Tina Kline]

Fantastic! I read this one earlier and it was fantastic!