Dear Self,

Dear Self,

A Poem by Mariesh

Dear Self, 
How can you stay strong and calm despite from the tragic life?
How can you overcome the gossips and the bullies?
How can you stand all alone when you think you are in darkness?
How can you think of life still be a life?
Dear Self,
Tragedies made me so strong and stand tall.
Gossip made me to observe and who to trust.
Thinking of darkness is not in my mind, but a glimpse of light.
Life is still life. Rolling in time.

© 2017 Mariesh


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A nice start, Mariesh.

Self reflections in writing are quite a healing experience; often during their construction we learn things about ourselves that perhaps we were not fully aware of.

Small note: second line...perhaps change to "despite the tragedy of life..." And drop the 's' from 'gossips', no plural.

I enjoyed your thoughts here. A good start.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Mariesh

6 Years Ago

thanks Doodley for the nice review and the encouragement.



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Well that turned out to be an awesome write I was going to say 1 step at a time but seems you already beat me :) That is a positive outlook.

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A nice start, Mariesh.

Self reflections in writing are quite a healing experience; often during their construction we learn things about ourselves that perhaps we were not fully aware of.

Small note: second line...perhaps change to "despite the tragedy of life..." And drop the 's' from 'gossips', no plural.

I enjoyed your thoughts here. A good start.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mariesh

6 Years Ago

thanks Doodley for the nice review and the encouragement.

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