Dying

how it feels to die

What is it like to die you may ask,

I will tell you for it is a farely simple task,

Cold , ridged skin is what you feel,

Wounded , bleeding , unable to heal,

For you there is no hearing

for you , you have no sight,

No it is time to die , 

I now feel that death

Upon my cold...ridged skin 

Author's Note

shortness

Reviews

[Katie L]

i feel like dying sometimes to, u did a good job

i like it, it's so simple but as you read it you feel your skin get a little colder... well at least i did....
oh you are so dark for one so young... but it works for you and you use words well... two thumbs up

[Little Amy Lee]

I love this poem very much.
There may be not alot there,
but as when you read it, it describes so so much.
Lovely use of words and a nice flow to the poem.
=]

[Alaina]

Definatley shortness..
I think though in those few words you really coveres the point.
Excellent write!:P

P.s Tragic Pancakes i as an AMAZING NAME! Rock on! :)