Love Kills All (poem form)

the last part of my story Love Kills All but in poem form

He pounded on the door as his heart began to tear

He pounded and pounded but no one was there

He rushed through the house hoping to find her soon

Only to find her slashing at her wounds

I love you was all that she said 

She fell to the ground and he knew she was dead

Unalbe to live

Unable to give

He took his life for love.  

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Erin Was Here.]

this is such a cool poem! i think that reading the story form first gave it more meaning. I love that you did both a story version and a poem version. I really like the rhythm of the piece and it flowed really well. Nice job.

[Alaina]

I love this it makes your story even better GREAT WRITE! :)
Keep up the excelent work man, thanx soo much for sharing.