I Love You And Good Bye

I Love You And Good Bye

A Poem by Thomas Snider
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This was a pretty short poem I made, but it was really entertaining. The hidden sides to it really make it a mind bender. Enjoy. =3

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Bang
Silence,
There I stared.
Hand covered in the crimson of my love.
From that hole you had made,
Spilt the warmth,
That once held you close with care.

Now it’s worthless,
This love of mine,
As the smoke rose from the barrel.

I did not know this would be you.
Standing on the other side.
The side that watched me fade away.
Falling to the ground below,
Watching me say,
I love you and good bye.

© 2008 Thomas Snider


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Added on March 18, 2008

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Thomas Snider
Thomas Snider

Penngrove, CA



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My name is Thomas Claude Snider. I am a writers in general. I write poetry and I write prose, specifically fantasy and science fiction. I started writing when I was in about the sixth grade. That was .. more..

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