Nobody

Nobody knows what I'm feeling,
I just sit here staring up at the ceiling.
Nobody gets through the walls I put around me,
Consumed in my thoughs so I keep drowning.
Nobody hears the voice in my head,
Repeating all the bad things that you've ever said.
Nobody listens to what I have to say, they forget I'm even there and just keep walking away.
Nobody realizes what I've been put through,
They only see the things that they want to.
Nobody understands what's happening to me,
I'm lost in my mind just trying to be set free.
Nobody realizes what words do,
They make you hate the real you.

Reviews

[Wonderland Asylum]

I would change ¨Nobody know¨ to ¨Nobody knows¨, add an ´s´ to the end of ´know´. ¨ceiling¨, not ´cieling´.
´what i have to say,...´ add a comma after say.
Other than those few minor mistakes, this is a really well written poem, I am able to relate to it.

[BlackCheetah]

Same! No Evers knows wht I have been through, they just but the blinders on and don't care. People are like that. It's a depressing world out there.

[shruthi]

Ya even i am feeling same..but don 't loose hope

[AYVID N]

Nobody realizes what I've been put through,
They only see the things that they want to.

A sad truth of life. People are like that. Acceptance brings peace. So well written.

Your words are sad but full of insight

[keith]

your talent is not betrayed by the often secretive subject of abuse
you have penned an excellent piece that has powerful message of truth
perfect in many ways

[Hopeless Dreamer]

Thank you.