Vibrant

Open space so vast and wide.

Engrossing all in a peculiar shine,

essence of light bringing joy to all.

Surrounding Brightness, Hopes standard tool.

Dark days doomed by lemon streaks.

Black blemishes broke by rays from sources, far less bleak.

As darkness close's in for good.

Feeling alone and shrouded by gloom.

We light the beacons, our man made fuel.

Illuminating spirits within us all.

When night draws in, hope's long gone.

Our inner light, forever shimmering on.

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy. I used the colour yellow as the central idea of the poem

Reviews

[R.M.C]

One of the hardest tasks for poems is making them flow easily, but you definitely achieved that with this poem. Even if the content was rubbish (it wasn't, just making a point here :) ) it would have been a good poem just for the ease at which it could be read. Really well done.

[Niall Madden]

Wow thank you I really appreciate that comment im glad you enjoyed it :)

[Andrew Dane Parker]

Another good one. Favorite line: "Dark days doomed by lemon streaks. Black blemishes broke by rays." It's good to read something that makes you feel decent. Good work.

[Niall Madden]

again thank you. it means a lot

[Eagergreen]

Accurate if not precise but precision isn't really the point of poetry at times is it? These kinds of poems could also be categorized in the "self help" area very nice for the hopeless

[Niall Madden]

jus read through all your reviews and I appreciated the feedback and interest