I need help from the Community

I have a series of books that I am slowly getting through. - books that are based in the same world/towns/people/etc. Yet, it takes place at different Eras. The series is called the Edarian Chronicles

Book 1: The White Witch - takes place during the second Demonic Crisis where 2 demons try to take over the world, but 1 demon, Aestaroth, resents her fate and turns against her kin by helping Sage-wielding (magic) fighters to stop the evil from destroy everything she fought to protect. 
~almost done with this~

Book 2: In the Hands of Fate - 500 years after the 2nd Demonic Crisis, A elven-dryad tries to find her place in the world and befriends a dwarf who doesn't want to mine, and a human prince who doesn't want to rule. They travel the Edarian lands trying to find where they belong and get into all kinds of troublesome situations. and meet the spirit of Aestaroth.
~slightly half way~

Book 3: (No idea what the title will be) - But! A retired warrior for the royal throne has everything he wants, a home, a wife, and a quiet, peaceful life.
A few days after they have (either boy and girl twins, or just a girl) a group of people using necrotic damage kidnap the child/ren and kill the wife then disappear without a trace. - When first approached by authorities, they guards think he killed his wife and disposed of the kid/s. And is arrested. Later, a young sage who can detect magic finds out that the father is innocent and brings it forth (no luck). So, she breaks the father out and helps him find his kids even if they have to go to the deepest circle of hell and back. 
~just started~

*takes a deep breath* I am trying to figure out a title for the third book and coming up blank as I used all my writing energy in coming up with the third tale. lol
Any ideas?

*I will hear any. Please.

Reviews

[Cody Jeremy Thompson]

Edarian Chronicles: The Fake Convict(or something like that)
Twist Of Fate
Hell's Prisoner/s(if child/ren are literally in hell)
Idk some ideas of you get a broader synopsis tell me so i could attempt to give more ideas.

[Hope_Lescase]

I really like Twist of Fate... Actually I may use that one for the second book XD

and the hell idea, I'm thinking of including. but not sure. Right now, in the father's case, it's more of an expression since he'll do anything to save his child/ren. I still need to figure out the exact order, but, I do know that there will be challenges he will have to face; including running from the guards, fighting magically enlarged creatures that will try to kill him and his companion.... um... some other stuff. haha

Lol. I'm going insane XD

[Cody Jeremy Thompson]

Yeah assumed it is but it's a fantasy setting so you can never be sure whether he's at one point going to fight a nine legged demon with Steven Spielberg,'s face. Well as I said when you get more info on it tell me. Eh insane people are the best as long as you keep a syringe of sedatives close to you.

[Hope_Lescase]

Haha that is clever! and I don't know where he will be going, per se, But it is a fantasy setting. There's four material realms. Middle, Spirit, Terren, and Infernal. In the first book, I have the characters travelling through all. - the Middle and the Infernal are on the same plane while the Terren and Spirit realms are more, large islands and there are only certain ways to get to them.

The first book covers all four, going deeply into the Spirit and Infernal.

The second book of characters mainly stay near the Terren and Middle (although they get captured by pirates on the Northern Sea.

The third book, I may be keeping him/them more on the Middle and Infernal. But, they will travel to the Spirit Realm so he can see his wife one last time before her spirit departs the material world.
- I'm thinking, I know what I want the necrotic sages to do with the child.

[Cody Jeremy Thompson]

Oh well take your time it's better to think things trough.

[Hope_Lescase]

Very much so! lol

[Davidgeo]

Easy... just call it --- "Generic Self Published Fantasy Novel #9309482098302058450982350825"

Have you people even heard of the term "market research"? Ever here the words "over" and "Saturation" used together in the same sentence?

It really doesn't matter what you call this... it would be the similar to giving an individual rain drop a proper name.

"Writers" like you are flooding the market with this cheap-o self published ego pumping self indulgent drivel.... you make it harder for real writers with a real voice and an actual topic. God damn s**t can sitcoms of the literary world... a non contribution at best a dumbing down at worst.

[Hope_Lescase]

Have you ever published a book? I have. It's no easy picnic. Because of 'writers" and their "cheap-o self published ego pumping self indulgent drivel" I cannot find a literary agent who would be able to help so I turn to the community out of my good heart.

And I'd rather be some "writer" rather than a psychotic, hell-bent, false poet who has no concept of actually writing a story.

[Inferno Moose]

man its a great thing that all you do is write frakin' poems and write reviews that try to demean people trying to write books, novels or anything that takes their fancy.
""Writers" like you are flooding the market with this cheap-o self published ego pumping self indulgent drivel" so what? isnt that good? isnt it good that people are writing and getting stories out to people who they think they may enjoy it? man its almost like if you arnt a professional writer i may as well not give a f**k and might as well of never learned how to write.


and please, this crap: "you make it harder for real writers with a real voice and an actual topic." oh f*****g no, the story that i want to tell is clearly getting in the way or mr poem writer here to get noticed with "I Pee'd a Little".

I bet you play Russian tanks on War Thunder and complain about not being op enough, you sounds like the type.

please get this arrogant talk out of here and go back to your own corner of shame.

[Davidgeo]

You can't find a literary agent because your work isn't very good. It's very simple. Most of us are not very good writers, it's a friggin fact. Myself included. But pretending crap isn't crap helps no one. The anger you feel towards me is the same that I feel towards glad handlers and pity peddlers. It's a cultural disease of a generation making social media hybrids out of everything. ANd don't worry p***y 1 and p***y 2, I won't be here that much longer.... you can get back to your mutual adirmation society bullshit in just a couple more weeks.

[Davidgeo]

By the way Shirley - self publishing does not make you published in most people's eyes. It simply means you are a consumer of a product known as "the vanity press". You are not a published author you are a published shopper.... you paid to call yourself published. Worse than a degree from University of Phoenix.

[Hope_Lescase]

And yet I feel no anger. More pity. towards you. That because you have a s****y life and s****y works that you have to take it out on other people who actually try to make something better.

[Inferno Moose]

i like the fact you call us p*****s, you can try to claim all the crap you want about "You can't find a literary agent because your work isn't very good" but the FACT is that her writing is very good and by more than a long shot better than yours; And the fact that you are here trying to batter down new writers says to me that you really dont know what you are talking about and frankly you need to leave and stay away from the writing community. by the way "self publishing does not make you published in most people's eyes." doesnt count for s**t because regardless of what you or others "think" she IS published.

[Davidgeo]

Yeah, people who aren't angry do tell other people they have s****y lives and s****y works. Have you ever been emotionally honest with yourself? You have no idea what that feels like do you? I don't pity you... I laugh at you.

[Davidgeo]

Okay, sure, her work is factually good. Sure thing buddy... Those lit agents and editors are just allergic to money right? You don't make sense kid.

[Hope_Lescase]

Good to see that you are learning about anger. And you have no concept of emotional honesty, honestly. And thank you for contradicting your earlier comment by saying that my work is "Factually good".

[Davidgeo]

Sarcasm can be tricky sometimes. I'm not shocked it escaped you in this moment. CHin up butter cup, someone still believes in you... somewhere... for some reason. Or not.

[KittyKatgirl]

HansJIzzy why bother reading other people's writing if all you're going to do is insult them. And from what I read Taylor Shirley has a great imagination and can come up with amazing ideas. Not only did you criticise one of my poems and say awful thing to my friends who stuck up for me, you're attacking other writers as well. People like you need to get their s**t together and learn to grow up. We can face criticism but there's no point in giving it if you don't tell the, how to improve their work. All you did was use it to abuse other writers.

[Cody Jeremy Thompson]

Well that's pretty mean and pretty nonsensical. We have critics nowadays and people read book reviews before buying them. Good books always get exposure and i doubt they'll be neglected because couple of self publishing writers entered the fray that is book market. I don't see why you holster such hate for these folks unless your brother was killed by a bookshelf of self published fantasy novels.

[ms. barrie]

I can totally empathize...penning a novel, even a short story
can be daunting

I enjoy the mystical/fantasy genre & this captures a Tolkien-esque touch to it
(meant as a compliment)

children's chamber

guardian of children (the)

sorry, that's all I can come up with lol...
good luck & have fun! (:

[Hope_Lescase]

Thank you. I know it's very Tolkien-esque. @.@. Thankfully, it does not follow his story in the slightest.
haha and I like Guardian of Children.

[ms. barrie]

you welcome...sounds like it'll be an intriguing read (:

[Hope_Lescase]

Thank you! :3 I hope they turn out well!