Prologue

Idk it was a spawn at like 2 am... Tell me what you think of it

"Topaz, you lazy a*s! Get up already, or you'll be late!"

Someone shouted, and, with a blink of her eye, she finished her makeup. She didn't bother answering, this was how things happened each time one of her siblings graduated. Now, here she was, seven hours from her high school graduation and shaking like a leaf.

The door to her room flew open to reveal her brother, Tomir, standing there in his traditional guard gear. She looked away from him, once again hating how her family seemed to be breaking away from her more and more each day, and picked up her jacket and heels.

"Let's go, Topaz. Your friends have been calling the house nonstop for twenty minutes now. If you aren't ready now, I'll drag you downstairs with me and you'll have to finish on the way."

Author's Note

I'll keep adding it as I have free time. What do you guys think so far?

Reviews

[McBear]

Holy poo! I loved this! The scenes were filled with good dialogue, humor and good flowing words. Just maybe add a little more detail for the transitions of what the girl is doing. I am excited to read more!

[Hope Rose]

Lol I was writing this in first hour yesterday and forgot about it. I'm going to add more today during my last hour