The Girl Of His Dreams

It was a Friday morning. The first time he saw her, he didn't know her at all, but he felt drawn to her. His friend Jt knew he had a crush on her and kept teasing him about it. Dalton didn't really care but he acted like he did. He didn't go near Hope, which was the girls' name, for a long time since the first time they talked, when she had said she would rather go back home instead of staying here. Jt kept telling Dalton to just ask her out, but Dalton was too scared to. Eventually they started talking again more and more and they became good friends. It also helped that she was in his class. As the days went by he thought about her all the time. He kept wishing he had enough courage to ask her out, but he just couldn't. He waited too long. Jt asked her out before he got the chance. Jt started rubbing it in his face. He had a girlfriend but Dalton didn't. Dalton had to keep lying and say that he didn't care, when he really cared a lot. Jt started being with her a lot and left Dalton alone. He was starting to get jealous...    After a while they broke up. Then they started dating again. When they went into 6th grade they were dating again. During a short time, Dalton counted 6 or 7 times they had dated and broke up. After a while they broke up for the last time. Finally he could ask her out. On her birthday, November 5, Dalton gave her a note asking if she would go out with him. She actually said yes! Dalton was so surprised and happy. Finally, he had the girl of his dreams.

Reviews

[Richard Patrick]

The story is very well written. On the occasion we have to take a chance on life. It is a game, lovers play. Praying they will find that certain girl who will love them as they wish to be loved. Your heart must fly into the sky on a warm summer night, play with the stars, you will find, you are right, with that girl or guy, just keep your love and heart alive you will survive. Believe for what do you have to loose. Believe you can and will be loved. LOve the only thing you be, you. That is why you are here to love, nuture your heart, be true to you.

[Hope Rose]

This is something my ex wrote. I found it in my email and decided to be a royal b***h (excuse my language) so I posted it on here. I realized afterwards that he is a lot more talented than me. Kinda sucks in a way.

[Richard Patrick]

do not give it another thought. You have to be true to your heart first, and for most. Love is what you do. It hurts when a break up occurs. Believe you are worthy of love. LOve your self first and r=for most. Love is what we all do, at times, we do not see, all that their is.

[Hope Rose]

True enough. Thank you, Richard. Your words mean a lot to me

[Richard Patrick]

Look at what you are to your friends, why are they there, because they are your friiends, LOve yourself. First and foremost,

[Hope Rose]

Yeah, true enough. Thanks