Wedding

My heart races in my chest

As I feel the slip of satin

And the weight of silk and diamonds

Then I hear the zip of the gown

And open my eyes to see

Giving a gasp of shock at what I see

Gold is the eye catcher

With a pearl neckline

That sets everything off

Including my dark hair

Which shines like rubies

Under the veil

I look stunning

Simply beautiful

Like a delicate child

Or maybe a porcelain doll

Dressed to look like

A bride on her wedding day

Truth be told

Inside I'm freaking out

I hide the biggest secret

From everyone

Including the man

I'm promising forever to

When "I do" has been said

And the whole ordeal is done

After the last guests are gone

I will slip out of this dress

And be with the man

I will love forever

And maybe someday

When the time is right

I'll give in to what he wants

But that may come soon

Because he doesn't know

That I carry his child now

Reviews

[Dead]

This is really good! Terrible my butt i done told you you're a really talented writer!

[Hope Rose]

like i told Silver Shadow, idk where it came from

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

this is so so so beautiful!!!!!!!!!! love it

[Hope Rose]

I don't honestly know where it came from. I think it was my future mixed with my only impossible wish

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

it is sssssssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooo beautiful

[Hope Rose]

Thanks a lot

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

anytime, welcome, if you want me to read something, just ask and i will read and review

[Hope Rose]

thanks. Btw, I finished Ch. 3 of A Cry For Help

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[Hope Rose]

lol i need to work on rj's story now so ch. 4 may be a while

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

okay, just read ch.3 and I LOVE IT

[Hope Rose]

lol it sux

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

lol, no it does not

[Hope Rose]

Yeah it does

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NO IT DOES NOT!!!!!!!!!!!.

[Hope Rose]

Does too
It's my work

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

but this reader thinks the different, it is amazing