The Invisible Truth

One of my first poems, truth is and should always be important..

Reviews

[Elizabeth J. Gelinger]

I think that everyone who've already dealt with people and got disappointed can relate to this. The more we get our hearts broken, the more we see when we look at other people. At some point I believe we just start seeing then as they really are, beyond all the lies. Really nice poem, short and simple, yet very complex.

[DreamsFloat]

I totally agree thanks!

[Cherrie]

What a strong title, it stands out on the page. Getting people to take a look is always the first task. I enjoyed your poem, it's good work.

[DreamsFloat]

thank you so much

[Hayet]

I've loved this one!
Truth is like freedom: hard to catch and to handle it. But we need it!
Encouragement from PPris, France.
Enjoy your writing!

[DreamsFloat]

I appreciate that very much!

[Cobblestone Traveler]

I enjoyed it. So much emotion packed into a small package.

[DreamsFloat]

Thanks a ton, very appreciated

[V]

Reads like a universal truth. Short but on point, yet it maintains this certain thoughtfulness that I like about your writings. I think it's actually well-written for a first try on poetry, of course, there's always something to improve, especially when it comes to writing or creating things in general. You'll inevidently water and grow your poetic abilities the more you read and write.

[DreamsFloat]

that is the ultimate goal thank you

[V]

You're welcome.

[LapseOfMind]

Another good one, nicely done. Keep it up!

[DreamsFloat]

will do thank you!

[Antoñyo]

Provocative piece. Thanks for sharing

[DreamsFloat]

and thanks for viewing

[forevermore1218]

loved it and a very successful start

[DreamsFloat]

much appreciated thanks!