The Drowning Men

Current takes away the drowning men,

some of them fight and win,

breathless others give up

current takes away the drowning men.

After teenage some young men

enter a strong current zone

some fight and escape whirlpool, others surrender,

current takes away the drowning men. 

31st Oct. 2016

Reviews

[Ted Kniffen]

Yes, all too many get swept up in the current and are lost to ideals or hegemony thrust on them by so -called leaders. Well done. A good write.

[Sumit Ganguly]

Thank you Ted for expressing your views. The society suffers most when just young ones are lost.