look at life

i wrote this after a really good friend of mine had a hard week and everything looked bad but he will have a better life sence he stays positive

bad times come forth and break our hearts

it seems like your life is just falling apart.

just as everything seemed perfect and swell.

one conversation makes you dwell.

lies are uncovered and true colors shine through.

you find out the hurtful truth.

feeling betrayed lost and confused,

turn to friends and wonder what to do.

life was so great until this one little talk

now you just cant get over the shock.

plans get cancelled and life turns upside down.

love can turn your life round and round.

you feel like a fool who was played.

this feeling you would gladly trade.

but everything that happens is supposed to be.

the past is the past so carry on please

dont dwell on what you cant change.

thoug i attmit things will be strange.

but stay positive and upbeat

and the world will be at your feet.

happieness will find you.

just lighten up and hang loose.

things will change i sware its true.

things will get better for you.

Author's Note

ignore grammar and spelling

Reviews

[Hope Wilson]

thanks

[Mauricio Montoya]

In life will have those ups and downs, writing is a good thing, it helps get those feeling out. Great job, keep on writing.