Generic, Cheesy Love Poem

I'm young, dumb, and in love, so I wrote this for my boyfriend.

Can we just lie here,

side by side?

Feel each other's heartbeats,

and know that we're alive?

 

Can we just lie here,

holding hands?

With our fingers entwined,

knowing that life is grand?

 

Can we just lie here,

staring into one another's eyes?

memorizing the colors,

and know that life's divine?

 

Can we just lie here,

at the beginning of the fall?

knowing that we're young

and we don't know anything at all?

Reviews

[A. F. Carrera]

This is so pretty. Nice shift at the end

[The Nude Writer]

Awwwwe so sweet :) such love in writing!