The Mask

The Mask

A Poem by The Gothic Tortoise

La Mascara:

Blanca, mas palida que el papel
Tiesa, mas dura que el concreto
Falsa, como mi alegria
asi es la mascara que llevo cada dia
para ocultar mis penas
ahogar mi dolor
proteger mi espiritu
prefiero llevarla como mi verdadero ser
a exponer mi alma a las criticas
prefiero que sea ella la que aguante los golpes
a que lo sea mi corazon, a duras penas latente
tan seca y fria es mi mascara
tal cual el portador

The Mask

White, even paler than paper
Hard, even stronger than concrete
Fake, like my joy
That is the mask i wear everyday
To hide my sorrow
Drown my pain
Protect my spirit
I preffer to wear it as my true self
Rather than expose my soul to critics
I rather let it be the one recieving the hits
Than my heart that barely beats
So cold and dry is my mask
As the one that wears it.

© 2015 The Gothic Tortoise


Author's Note

The Gothic Tortoise
The original is in spanish so... some mistakes are to be expected,
the original is above and below it is the english version.

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the spanish one has a different feel to it . amazing though

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Gothic Tortoise

9 Years Ago

i'm glad you liked it, however, i'm curious about what you mean about a ''different feel', i'd like .. read more
yashmita13

9 Years Ago

Haha even in not sure how to describe it exactly.
I like the feelings conveyed in this poem. Hits very close to home.

If I might ask, would you mind putting up the original spanish version, please?

Seria bueno que lo hicieras para asi poder verlo en su forma original.
Por favor, no pares de escribir, y menos si escribes asi. Muy agradable.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Gothic Tortoise

9 Years Ago

Oh Thank you so much :) me alegra te haya gustado, publicare el original junto con mas que tengo, ma.. read more

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Added on March 18, 2015
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The Gothic Tortoise
The Gothic Tortoise

Guacara, Venezuela



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I'm a 17 yr old student from venezuela I like writing poetry, drawing, eating, walking and much more. I love drawing or writing poetry while listenging to music, i mostly hear ''Unknown Mortal Orche.. more..

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