Darkness

A poem wrote about the darkside of a girls life.

Darkness is your home, it is a old trusted friend 
Lonelyness keeps you company through thick and thin 
The days warp and spin reality seem to twist and bend 
Deep inside your dimmed out soul smiles a wicked grin 

Hate is all you know, Like a deeply planted seed left to grow 
The fake smiles, and empty laughs all apart of the rehearsed show 
The days seem to creep by all to slow, you being your own worst foe 
The sins of yesterday lay bare like blood stained snow. 

A faint glimmer, a shiny shimmer, that of a distant white glow 
A warming reminder of a happy life left to grow ever so dimmer 
Life will get better though, as it's up to you to leave the final blow 
On the old friend now turned foe

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

I admire the rhyming and the truth you told with this. Darkness is quick to become someone's home, scary, but true. The first stanza was my favorite because I felt that even though days seem dark, you somehow push yourself to smile through it. That's what many do when they have accepted darkness as a friend, though inside, they know darkness can quickly betray and hurt. Stunning write and loved how I could relate :)

[Brittany]

love it you did a really greate job sweetie

[Ink Seductress]

It's great. You really captivated me through out the whole thing, i was riveted to it, it felt trance like. You have a great talent!

[NhesceyWrites/]

this is very interesting. nice flow of words.
-Nhescey

[Christopher Beyer]

Thank you, glad you liked it! =D

[Christopher Beyer]

This poem is dedicated to my dear friend Desiree