Idea of love

This poem was wrote about the idea of liking someone/loving someone, and how it can affect you.

So very early in the morning, before the sun brings light

You plague my mind, such a clear mental sight

Though life brings its obstacles to challenge our being

Babe life with you is a wonderful song worth singing

If you feel like life is just to much to bear

The agonizing feeling of utter despair

Open your eyes up wide, who knows, you might just find

Your greatest relief is not far from mind

Love is like a roller coaster, you may grow weary

No emotion you can ever feel could compare to the fiery

Of knowing you let slip the greatest parts of life

though a broken heart can sometimes hurt worse than a knife.

Reviews

[HidingBehindTaylor]

"You plague my mind, such a clear mental sight." That sounds like an oxymoron to me. Kind of. But I really like the idea. I wonder what it's like to have a clear mental sight.
The definition of love is basically deep affection. But I just think it's pain in disguise.
This is a nice idea of it. Although people view it differently. I like this view.

[Christopher Beyer]

Well the clear mental sight is referring to the person in question. Being able to see them clearly, mentally. But yes, love is pain, and love is also a great feeling, this is why i finished with,
"Love is like a roller coaster, you may grow weary
No emotion you can ever feel could compare to the fiery
Of knowing you let slip the greatest parts of life
though a broken heart can sometimes hurt worse than a knife."

[Tavionna]

Very sweet, its adorable =)

[Christopher Beyer]

Glad you enjoyed it thank you for reading

[Tavionna]

your welcome, anytime =)

["writing by" KS]

I liked this alot. Thank you

[Christopher Beyer]

Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed reading it

[Brittany]

i think i read this already but anyways lol you did really good loved your choice of words