Indigo

I’m looking for the perfect pair of blue jeans.

 Ones you can wear traipsing through a grassy field

Or walking down a crowded city street.

 Jeans to look stunning in while eating out on Saturday nights

Or lounging on the couch watching Lost  

On a Wednesday evening.

They have to fit perfectly,

Snug enough in the rear to make my a*s look good,

 Dark enough so that my legs look like they extend for miles.

When I wear them men have to stop and watch as I walk by,

Their women elbowing them in the ribs for looking. 

The sort of jeans that make other women stop

To ask where I bought them, but I’ll only smile

And tell them I can’t remember.

They’ll fit better after every wash,

 Molding themselves to my body

Like they were made just for me,

As if they come to life as soon as

I pull them over my hips,

Sliding the zipper in place.

I’m looking for the perfect pair of blue jeans,

But the search goes on and on.

 

Reviews

[Big ol' Kahuna]

You already own a pair of jeans like that, but they aren't that dark, they are kind of lighter, and have the x cross tie thingy in the back, and yeah, those are the ones! Butt I don't remember where you got them at. I will just have to smile and ask you politely to pick up that pen I dropped, for the fifth time in the last two minutes!
This is a nice light theme, poking a little fun at the end. I like it.
Good job lady!

[Anastasia Starlena]

Jeans are so much fun there is nothing like a good pair of jeans. Baggy t-shirt and bluejeans are my favorite thing in the world. Such a wonderful feeling I love whoever came up with denim...

[cilla]

Oh my � and don't we just want to wear those jeans like a second skin? This is a great write � a little bit of humor mixed in with a very serious quest that can drive us all crazy. And just as we want other women to stop and inquire � we ourselves become hypnotized by perfect snugness wrapped around feminine hips and the fluid movement of a perfect a*s and that luscious sway.

Like Cinderella's dress � the perfect jeans don't stay perfect and in a few precious months � we're back on that quest.

Great work � you managed to say what all of us were thinking �

[MIA ST. PAUL]

Where can I get a Pair! This is great. I love the way you take something so 'everyday" and turn it into gold!
Nice Job!

[MICHAEL]

Me too.

[BABSIE BEE]

I soooo love this. It could be me speaking. You got it right....all the things you request for the perfect pair of jeans are exactly what I request. I giggled as I read this because of it,s similarity. Well done. Hope you find them soon, cos I could,nt live without mine !! Cheers.
BABSXXX

[Alice Oiseau]

I recently just found a pair of perfect jeans that are exactly what you're talking about, lol! I'm wearing them right now. But "I don't remember" where I got them, haha!

A simple poem, though a delightful read.
Cheers.

[Flow~]

It is amazing how jeans fit women so well, a causual look that is just stunning when worn by a woman. yes it stops traffic, makes mouths drool and minds dream. you are making me miss being outside on a hot summer day just watching women walking by in their lives.

[Nix]

Hah, love this! Where an earth do you get your ideas from? Have you been shopping this weekend by any chance? :) I love how the poem reads, its almost a tease, you have to keep reading. I am still searching for the perfect pair, but if I find them I wont tell you were I got them, I'll just smile. LOL Love it! x