The Chase

My soul is slowly darkening, blackened and lost, or perhaps it’s just chilled by this harsh frost.                She’s running away into the dark forest, Where she knows my fears will be waiting for me at the threshold of this menacing forest.                   What she doesn’t realize is she took the part of me that fears, along with my heart.

But… Souls are hard to lose and harder to find, especially when they wish to hide. Seems to me I’ll be just fine without mine

Author's Note

Tell me what you think

Reviews

[revalatia]

Perhaps within that game of hiding, once one is retrieved the other wont be as harsh a sting as before.. whichever is found first. Interesting.. im rooting for the one who searches.. regardless of the outcome :)

[Honeypeaches]

Maybe one day in the future we will know

[AmandaFuller]

I love it. Nice job!! Keep it up.

[Honeypeaches]

Thank you for your response

[AmandaFuller]

No problem.

[Rose]

Its very deep and touching ^^ I enjoyed reading it ..I think you've missed a word or too maybe you'd find them if you prove read it but other than that its good

[Honeypeaches]

its all there... but thank you for the response! :D

[Rose]

Your welcome ^^ keep it going!