BABY MAMA

BABY MAMA

A Poem by Honey54
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This song/Poem is to the women who make it soo hard for good MEN to raise their children...

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She welcomed him with her blessing..

 

He enter her never guessing...or to question

for what they would be destine...

 

to bare another soul..

wrapped in temptation so bold.

 

She.. she bared trails because she hold,

an infant in her womb...

 

Days when his little feet outlined her belly

tumbling like a drum..

The pressure; it grew real heavy

 

And though unsure..He was there..

to help with the pain she had to endure..

 

nights her infant would swim in her wild..

they waited..and waited for their beautiful child.

 

NOW he's here a beautiful blessing..

there's so much to learn..

 

a new taught lesson..

 

Who would have thought after passion would come

reckless action..

 

She used the child to get a reaction...

of course from her baby daddy...

 

Selfishly she centered their relationship...

 forgetting her son hadn't anything to do with it

 

Using the poor infant..

So she could contradict..

 

Her better judgement was not equipped..

She had misused her God giving gift.

 

I swear some babies Mamas use their child to be Manipulative..

that's no way for an innocent child to live...

 

 

© 2012 Honey54


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This is true.
Because there are a lot of women who are also wrong in a relationship
or played a major part in the relationship breakdown,
but somehow they like to use children as a way to get at the man.
Yes, there are some bad guys; just the same way there are bad women.
The child should not be used to get at one another.
Adults have to be responsible and mature enough to handle their problems without having to use the child as a weapon.
This is not fair on the child.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

This is true.
Because there are a lot of women who are also wrong in a relationship
or played a major part in the relationship breakdown,
but somehow they like to use children as a way to get at the man.
Yes, there are some bad guys; just the same way there are bad women.
The child should not be used to get at one another.
Adults have to be responsible and mature enough to handle their problems without having to use the child as a weapon.
This is not fair on the child.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Strong massage here, living in Tijuana I saw A lot of this going around especially when it came to begging money, the parents would send the children to do their biding sad but true.
Excellent write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A sublime poem.....u have evolved as a matured writer i guess..nyc write

Posted 12 Years Ago


I cannot stand when anyone uses their innocent child as a means to manipulate. My sister used her 3 children against me and my mother once - it is just wrong. I like your piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've never had any experience with this, but I know in some parts of Europe while I was over there I would see Gypsy women use their sick children for sympathy and to get more money from passerbys. I think anyone that uses their child for selfish gains has no right being a parent.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with you completely. It IS manipulative! Children are blessings, not leverage. A very thought provoking write. Thank you, Honey.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It certainly isn't. I have lots to say on this subject but most would be private. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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