Every Start Stops

No Hope Lost.

Every Start Stops!

Many, many along the way,

Child of God watch and pray,

Many, many have gone astray,

Clap for joy, no hope to fail. 

Ride on, ride on, see the end,

Faint not, sleep not, tell me when?

Amidst the way, all plans did fail,

Incomplete! Very frail,

And it all seem so,

Every star drops,

Every start stops.

- Homason.

Author's Note

Lost in the physical, I feel invisible. Can we be grateful of nothing? Reviews please...

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

What I understood from this poem was that to everything there is an end point.. Some may never think that anything will ever stop.. But in the end everything does..life, nature, us.. all of this will be forgotten or else vanish.. I find it disconcerting though.. I liked reading this though not sure if I interpreted it correctly...

[Alison Martin Lloyd]

Sounds like a journey. I like this, it travels and has momentum. Thank you

[Unique1217]

Selfishness seems to be the root of all of our troubles... This world seems impossible, I have had to step back to the basics and assess really what and who I am allowing in my own life that is or may be trickling onto my own struggling success.