Exhale!

Aquatic Law

Exhale  

Banging Pressure came shattering hope 

Ranting Panic seeking confusion 

Deep Darkness flooding everywhere 

Loneliness whispering fear 

Sweaty heart thinking out; 

Run, run 

But old clock ticking loud; 

Exhale, exhale. 

Stunning cunning wind 

Blowing gaseous wine 

Fear sweeping off my feet 

Pressure kissing all my face 

How long shall the sun sleep? 

But crawling Morning came calling; 

Exhale, exhale.

Homason.

Author's Note

When obstacles surround you, what do you do first? I Exhale. What do you think about this?

Reviews

[Nessly]

"Loneliness whispering fear," great line. Love this piece!

[Homason]

Encouraging points to note. Thanks Yum. and Jacob.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome Homason☺

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This is a really nice perspective given here! We do indeed exhale when in trouble trying to rid ourselves of the looming horror. Good job :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it feels like drowning in life...we want to wake up from the bad dream and find the surface...

if we let it out (exhale) then we can begin to let it in, once more...

a starting over.