Story of My Life. (I Can't Sleep)

Story of My Life. (I Can't Sleep)

A Poem by Julia Hollywood
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I had to clean out my computer, and I found this. Let me know what you think.

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I want to be asleep now,
I want to be in bed,
I want to lay down now,
The pillow on my head.

I took a fistful of aspirin,
Thinking it was late,
But as I began to try to sleep,
I started to hallucinate.

I thought I saw a heard of sheep,
In some random field.
One of them came up to me,
He said his name was Bob,
I sat there and watched him silently,
As he ate corn-on-the-cob.

I hear someone at the door,
I wonder who it could be.
Hopefully it’s someone who will catch me if I OD.

So now it’s really late,
And while I should be asleep.
I'm far away from bed,
It's so sad that all I have

Is the random crap in my head.

© 2009 Julia Hollywood


Author's Note

Julia Hollywood
I suck at poetry, it's not my thing. Don't be surprised by the fact that this sucks.

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Great Job! This is awesome, just work on the rhythm and you'll be a perfect poet! Love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ah I know how you feel although I have never hallucinated and seen a sheep called bob.
This is really entertained. I agree with "iamawriter" the last line might work better if it were condensed.
Nice Write!
-ST

Posted 15 Years Ago


The last line might flow a bit better if it was a condensed. But it's still a great poem. I'm an insomniac myself, so I can really relate to this. Keep writing and I will keep reading!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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My name is Julia Hollywood and I'm 16. I LOVE Jeremy Davies and all of his crazy movies (especially the Locusts)--they inspire me. I'm attempting to write short stories. I've no idea what else to say... more..

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