Florida

Florida

A Poem by Holly O'Brien
"

Sometimes it's hard to let go

"
I left her in Florida
The girl I fell in love with
I think...

She was the girl
that made me smile
at nights...

She was the girl
that helped me to
love life...

She was the girl
that gave me
everything...

She was the girl
that left me with
nothing...

As I turn through
the pages of my
mind...
I can't help but
remember time after
time...
How her smile would
bring about mine...
How her presence would
be my sunshine...

These are good memories
going bad...
I'm reminded of someone
I no longer have...

All I can do is
Remember those days
When we laid
When I gazed
Straight into those
beautiful eyes
and I cried
and I cried
Just to get her back
Maybe God would have mercy
and give me that...
Not a moment too soon
Not a second too late
I would hate
to have missed my turn
I'm the one
who just never learns
to let things go
to take things slow

But I left
Wishing I did not have to leave her
in Florida...

© 2010 Holly O'Brien


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A touching confession…
A sweet way of sharing a page from your life….
An apt way to arouse some unknown pain in the mind of the reader ….
Loved it soooooooo….
Much holly…


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh boy, I can so relate, but I'm moving on. :) Time does help.

Great write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Holly O'Brien
Holly O'Brien

Macon, Georgia



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Well I was born and raised in Nassau, Bahamas but I currently reside in Macon, Georgia where I attend college (IT major). Writing has always been my passion and it always will be. A very good friend .. more..

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