Falling for...

Jumbled thoughts of love

Lustful lips long for each other
in the dark where there are
fingers playing

Moonlight stretches into the
distance, granting tales for
this love

My soul peeked from behind
its' camouflage, when you
appeared out of nothing

Hostile images bounce in and
out of place,
Too nude for open shame.

Blameless are the sins of
the gods
When they blessed me with you.

Author's Note

would be nice to know what you can interpret from this...

Reviews

[M O R P H I N E]

This is just beautifully written. I really love it and I think the message behind the words is even more beautiful.
What I get from this is two people that want to be together, and it's just taking so long for something to happen between them. Then magic just takes place and all of a sudden....the narrator is falling in love. Well, I could be wrong about the real meaning behind all of this.
I just liked reading it and I found it very sweet.
Good work.

[Angel's Lady]

Sensually written, though it is, could it be about a sunrise?

"when you appeared out of nothing" made me think of how it looks at the beach when the sun rises...

Very beautiful, no matter what it's about.