All Because You Said

All Because You Said

A Poem by Balls:)
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Well as you all know, I really like Caleb. Well last night, im pretty sure i got my answer about being with him, and well... im not crushed at all. :)

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We've let each other in, 
Almost as deep as we could go.
We've told each other secrets, 
That only our closest friends know.

So basically that means, 
That we're pretty close now too, 
I'm so, so, very glad, 
That i'm best buddy's with you.

I knew i felt something inside, 
something i couldn't figure out, 
I thought we were to be together, 
together forever no doubt.

But last night when we were talking, 
Your helped me figure out,
that one little feeling, 
that i've been wondering about.

Best Friends is what we are.
It's what we're supposed to be, 
It's now completely obvious, 
I dont know why i didnt see.

You've been there to talk, 
You've been there to listen, 
and every single time,
my eyes start to glisten.

I've never been more happy,
I've never been more content, 
I thought it was really funny, 
that you didnt know what that meant.

You made my night, 
You made my day, 
and all because you said, 
"I love you Holley, in a friend way."

© 2011 Balls:)


Author's Note

Balls:)
in the poem it says "I've never been more happy, I've never been more content, I thought it was really funny, that you didnt know what that meant."
Well, that's just what happened lol i told him i was content and he said, "Im sorry, but i don't know what that word means." so cute... lol

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Sometimes it's better if people are just friends. Being intimate (not in a sexual way) sometimes changes the way that person acts towards you. Glad you weren't crushed though. Nice ending too. Keep it up =]

Posted 13 Years Ago


Exactly my point :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aww, well at least he loves you :D :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


i loved reading this.. your a great poet... keep it up

Posted 13 Years Ago


cute. i really liked reading this

Posted 13 Years Ago


This reminds me of myself and specific friendship I'm in right now. It's cool how you wrote this and wrote it very well. Nice job :]

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really cute. It's good that you're not crushed about being friends. You two will stay friends forever. I loved this! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awe. This is really cute. And i'm glad that you aren't crushed over the whole just friends thing. Who knows. Stay as close as you are now and the future might change how you two see about each other and you might become more than just friends.:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awe. This is really cute. And i'm glad that you aren't crushed over the whole just friends thing. Who knows. Stay as close as you are now and the future might change how you two see about each other and you might become more than just friends.:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Balls:)

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