Love

Such a fragile thing.
Wraps you around with its warmth.
A wonderful feeling.
Shared by two.
Such a fragile thing.
It starts to crack.
It fades away.
Pain is felt.
Death is caused.

Such a fragile thing..

 

Author's Note

Review please.

Reviews

[Revery]

Tender awareness of all the continues to flow by us like a river including something like love that of all things we wish would be constant and unwavering. Beautiful write.

[qaralynn]

good work!

[HoorayForUnderdog]

I enjoyed your concise description of the phases of love. If I might make an editing suggestion: I think it would be nice to add one more line and have your poem end with the line "such a fragile thing". This would balance out your poem and emphasize that love is fleeting.

[tshigg]

In such a short poem you have captured the ups and down of true love. Great job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Love is best and worst days in a life. I like the story you create in your short poem. A journey of love and disappointment in 32 words. That is amazing. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Mauricio Montoya]

what I get from this piece is a love that in the end is not true.

[Jason Shadows]

Immortal To Words Within The Word "LOVE".
Many Speak Of It But Does Not Know How Use It Or Knows What It Is But "LUST".
The Darkness Wraps Around Taking A Such Beautiful Thing Away That Should Have Been Everlasting In Hope.

Break Apart The Words And Begin To Reveal A Darker Side To A New View Of Another.
I Like This. Just Straight To The Truth. Point Blank.

[Hollow Man]

Simple, straight-forward, honest.

kgs

[TL Boehm]

succinct but true.

[PaperDoll]

I like this. The journey of love falling apart in nine lines. Excellent.