I Want It

I Want It

A Poem by Rafif
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Random thoughts.

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Turn, turn, turn around.
Look for it till it's found.
Stop for a second.
Disappear into thin air.
Pretty unfair?
Gather yourself up.
Yes, I'll boss you around.
Till you make sure it's found.
Wave that flag.
Unpack your bag.
Show me whatcha got.
Let the flames boil up that pot.
Turn that cube into a sphere.
Make sure what I want is here.
Yes, I'll f*****g boss you around.
Till you f*****g make sure it's found.

© 2010 Rafif


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Rafif
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You must know my roommate; that sounds like her dialogue with herself on her daily searches for things she misplaces. I like this. We all have or have had these momemts.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a cool write:) Making someone find something for you and controling them. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Look for it till it's found.
Look, till it's found ( changes the flow but when I read it out loud I like it better)
:)
Words have power and therapeutic value, keep writing you have talent.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very Interesting In Order To Take Control Over Others. Sounds Dark And Moving In Mind.
I Like It.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 29, 2010
Last Updated on December 29, 2010
Tags: What I Want, Poem, Random thoughts, Random, Bleh, Baha, HisLastWalk

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Rafif

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