That moment

That moment

A Poem by Hiru

I was in the bus..standing with a tired face..
I was on my way to home …
Suddenly a slight breeze touched my tired face..!!
 I looked through the window..to know where i was..
Yeah..!! It was the sea breeze..! We were passing Galle face.! 
Then my heart shouted aloud in wanting to see the sea..! 
Yeah..finally that blue never ending ocean!! 
Tides going up and down …
sea breezes washing away my tiredness..
That mourning sound of the ocean..!! 
And there was a ship sailing in the far away ocean..alone..
I stared at it for a long time …
At that moment I felt jealous for those who were in the ship,
Because they can enjoy that moment whenever they want..
But when i came to my senses back..
i realized it's not something to be jealous of..
as there lives are always at a risk..
They don't know when will this calm sea become vulnerable..!
They live in fear of the sea..so how could they enjoy that moment??
I felt lucky for my self..! I was able to enjoy that moment..
That moment of freedom..!! That moment of relaxation..!!

© 2017 Hiru


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You write quite well for someone whom English, is not native tongue. Keep writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Hiru

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much for those encouraging words..

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Hiru

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