Nature Calls

NATURE CALLS

I see beautiful skies,
It's like a paradise earth
I want to feel the breeze,
Sleep under a palm tree

Wish poverty never existed
The earth filled happiness,
Never suffer in pain anymore
We will live in peace

Maybe God will take away
Wipe all the evil in dust,
The earth will renewed
All wonderful blessings,

When natures call me
I watch birds fly in the sky
Clouds tagging each other
Make a child-like shapes

Oh, I wish we're in paradise?
We will find peace on earth,
No children will be starve
The smiles returned,

When you hear nature calls
Bird with their nests,
Waterfall tickles my ear
Hearing nature sings again

I see colorful rainbows,
Over the side of the mountain
We sing to almight god,
As nature sings in harmony

You will never feel alone,
Underneath the dark forest
Every fireflies spark lights
Every flower will blossom

You will journey the valley,
Take a look around;
When will humans will live on earth
God has given to you,

See horses run on a field
They are wild and free
No longer being captived
Earth will reign again,


Little children on playground
Old ones become young
Love ones resurrected again
Remain in god's love,

All my stress faded away
When the nature calls,
Every waterfall beats down
Stream rivers and vast of

I hear nature calling me
I wish I could stay
Woke up from the sound
Wish that dream was real,

When nature calls me again.

Reviews

[Owen Aldin]

Its a very nice piece. I think it would work really well in a mindfulness session to help really focus in on some of the beauty that nature can offer as you have captured it well!

[Celie Rose]

Beautiful description, I want to be there. In just a little while longer

[Hiroshi Masters]

Thank you soo much. This is an old poem, some people will not like it. But that's okay. I am not going to stop writing! :)

[Hiroshi Masters]

Haha trying to get the message out there too!

[William Gardner]

Journey is a capital on purpose? Not sure what you want here, what do you want? Are you telling me about your one on one with nature? Where is it?

[Hiroshi Masters]

thank you.i take your constructive criticism to heart. I do not make sense in this poem, i only create an imagery... But i will rework on this one also

[Celie Rose]

Please do not be discouraged. You poem made perfect sense to me. Keep writing.

[William Gardner]

Definitely keep writing. I'm sorry if I sound critical, your skills are there. If the poem gets more purpose it will have more punch. Try it out.

[Hiroshi Masters]

No need to apologize. I'm still a decent writer and I want to grow more as a poet. I dont want to be treated be as a baby, I want to expand my skills and knowlegde on my writing. I am listening and of course it hurts me but I understand it. Thank you. :)

[William Gardner]

Glad to hear it, let me know if I can help.