Losing you

It is about losing someone especially a love one... This is a very dramatic poem and I hope you like it.

Losing You

I wish I could see you
You make me feel numb,
You were gone in my life
I feel lonely every day,

There were times I miss you
Emotion pierced like needles
I blamed myself everything
Losing you in my life,

I can't control my pain
Feel depressed without you,
I smoke my last cigarette
Thought It was a dream,
You transform into a smoke

Suddenly tears start to fell
She looks at me in the eye
Promised she'll never go
My heart starts to beat,

I know I'm not alone
I knew she will be here
My ghost forever in life,
She'll always be in my heart

I wish I could touch you
Feel your lips onto mine,
Touch your skin one more
I wanted to hold you tight

Every day I dreamt of you
I want to hear your voice,
Visioning our love together
When I shed tears for you.

I wish I undo my wrongs
Changed back time,
Admit mistakes for you
You would always forgive me

We would dance our song
Since prom in high school,
Listen to you singing along
Sadly, It's never the same.

I can't take off this brick
It's like a heavy concrete chest,
I wish you were here,
Losing you feels unreal.

Can't tell if I was delusional
My feelings were real,
I knew you're thinking of me
Wish I could your hand

You slowly fade away
Losing you was devastating
I yelled "Don't go babe"
She smiled and said,
"I have to go babe"

Then smokes dissappeared
I know you're watching me
She's always my shooting star now

My love for you wasn't gone
Someday we'll meet again,
You're my babe forever
Now I sit alone and sobbed

Thinking what have I done?
You know deeply hurts me
Why oh why?
Those years have passes quicker.

Reviews

[Pash]

I can relate to losing the one you love. Allot of passion in your words.
Allot of deep and raw emotions. I was with you through every stanza.
Keep writing, and keep creating.
Thank you for sharing.
DB

[Asra Hakak]

strong emotions deep thoughts
liked this one so much
~Asra.

[Hiroshi Masters]

Thank you so much for reading :)