Don't wish to die

Don't wish to die

keep dreaming till you die

shatter

burn

give up

and come back like an ocean wave

you are too precious

you have always been precious;

an uncut gem

gradually polished 

by the grindstone of time

guard your dreams

like an eagle guarding its nest,

hide your pain

in front of the world,

cry out loud 

in your bedroom,

but don't wish to die 

too many dreams gone

with the tides,

too many souls lost early,

if only they had waited a day longer

or bled a mile more

history would have been richer

with more tales of courage

raw and grand

don't wish to die

keep dreaming till you die

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Sadly people can become overwhelmed by events and take their own lives. With many, it is a cry for help. Help to stop the pain they are going through. The world has lost many great talents as a result of mental health problems. I see this poem as a tribute to them but also a warning that anyone could find themselves in this situation. A thoughtful composition on the plight of the vulnerable. A compassionate poem.

Chris

[Oliver Silvermane]

Much obliged Chris