imagine

Family

Imagine yourself being pulled away from everything. Its hard to say couldn't bare it myself i love my famly an every little mistake that i have made i my life it has made me into a better person. A person that i never knew. I  have to say its amazing how things work for the best. remember when you were a child what did you want to be when you grew up....Me i wanted to be a doctor so i could help people in need....still want to be....now see yourself as that person...how does it feel.....GREAT. In my life so far its been one crazy ride loing an gainig man its awsome...... Imagine if one day you look back on what has happened to you do you laugh???? or think about how hard its been....

Reviews

[Wordspeak]

Ashley,
Your imagination, as expressed in this writing, has pointed your readers to several issues of your life, hopes and dreams, all at once. Write about one subject ONLY at a time. Use the first sentence to introduce the subject, then use the rest of the paragraph to grow that subject by adding details about the subject of that first sentence.

Take Care.

[Ashley Hiracheta]

First one dont be haste tell me