TIME

TIME

A Poem by Star

Time will pass us by

Time tells no lie

 

For our regrets are ours alone

We cannot change the clock

It moves forward only by fate

Going backwards would only be a mistake

 

What is learned, should be learned

What will be, will be

 

If we screw up, then tomorrow will still come

Today we have a second chance to make it up

 

Time is as a dream

Ten grudges or regrets of things not done

Flashing through our minds one by one

 

We cannot hold them in our hands

or closely to our heart, as we wish we would have done

before

 

Time is only for us , not God

For we are the imperfect

 

It goes as fast as the stars loose their light

As one galaxy dies

 

A moment must be locked up within our soul

or too we will loose it with time

 

And time it will continue to go...

 

 

© 2013 Star


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Time is only for us , not God

For we are the imperfect



It goes as fast as the stars loose their light

As one galaxy dies



A moment must be locked up within our soul

or too we will loose it with time

Fascinating - perceptive thoughts on time. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Star

11 Years Ago

oh hey thank you so much
A really nicely done poem. Very creative and skillfully done. I think you did a wonderful job on this poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Star

11 Years Ago

Thank you tina
Tina Kline

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome!
Beautiful, expressive glimpse of time... our place in the world... our hope in the tomorrows... Flowed rhythmic like a song. Love the heart and soul you put into your words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Star

11 Years Ago

Very appreciated thanks:)
Words of great wisdom. Thank you for the inspiration...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Star

11 Years Ago

Truism. Thanks.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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Star

Yakima, WA



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I grew up in southern CA, live in Washington state, am a nursing assistant which I like what I do... but my passion is to write!! I am hippy of some sorts, love animals and flowers and plants and nat.. more..

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