Moonshine

Moonshine

A Poem by Stardust
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My mate Moonshine loves when I play guitar for her. This is how I'll repay her for listening whenever I'm feeling alone.

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As your flaky eyelashes flutter, Moonshine,
The moon you gaze at begins to dance.
Your eyes shimmer and your beating heart paints a line,
Creating a message that puts me in a trance.

From your ruby lips, words spill and I heed,
"Love comes as easy as a new craving,
But grows into something like a need.
No longer fall in love and begin misbehaving."

As your scarlet heart pounds faster, Moonshine,
The sky you gaze at begins to smile.
Your fingers tingle and our minds intertwine,
"I was always sure this was worthwhile."

© 2010 Stardust


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This was cute and passionate. I really think it was good. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Creative and passionate, nice title, can't beat it, it's great, nice job, I liked it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is the sort of poem that puts the reader ina trance....Very good. I like your use of vocabulary, and also the name of the poem. Good work :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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gosh that's lovely, flowing perfectly..nicely penned

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is so lovely, i enjoyed this write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Awww beautiful! loved it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


love is an addiction lol very creative use of vocabulary

Posted 14 Years Ago



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