Raine

Raine

A Poem by Stardust
"

To my mate Raine. She's always there for me and loves singing when we're out in the fields during rain :)

"
Raine, Raine, you're here to stay,
I know you'll never run away.
Raine, Raine, come and play,
In the wet fields we will lay.

Where have you gone?
Where did you go?
You're such a good hider, don't you know.
Come out, my friend,
See what I've got,
The caring, friendly heart you sought.

Raine, Raine, you're here to stay.
I know you'll never run away.
Raine, Raine, come and play,
In the wet fields we will lay.

© 2010 Stardust


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This was good. I like the way you put the melody to the song in the piece. Good job. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This one is enjoyable, I really liked it, and the way you spelled Rain, very cool, keep it up.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is so wonderful and cute, enjoyable read

Posted 14 Years Ago


very interesting and cute!

Posted 14 Years Ago


very cute!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Cute, it;ll go great in replacement of the "rain, rain, go away." lyrics. It was very cute in my opinion and I also like the picture that goes along with it! Great job! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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My name is Stardust Fuse. (Yeah... that's my name) I lived in Oregon right on the coast ever since I was born, that is, until we moved to Iowa when I turned 12. My poetry is usually about nature a.. more..

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