Motivation

For the ones who cry and close their eyes
And try to find their way back home
Who stumble around making awful sounds
And think they're all alone
It's not the end don't call it quits
It's just a little bump on your path
So open your eyes and embrace the sky
We're gonna make this last

For the ones who sold their beautiful souls
Because time was fading fast
Just to have another breath today
They gave away their past
Don't say goodbye, because we can try
To pull it all together
Don't ask why, just look to the sky
We can fight the stormy weather

Reviews

[CircusNerd]

this is super duper pretty :) i love it ^_^

[Mistral Bilgera]

i never knew you can write such positive piece until now.
shows your versatility. good job!

[A]

LOVE this! It's so positive and a great way to look on the brighter side of things.
"It's not the end don't call it quits
It's just a little bump on your path
So open your eyes and embrace the sky"
My favorite lines^. This poem was one of the best I've read in a really long time. Great message! Very well written and great poem! :)