Blindfolded

Turn your head now
Don't look at the world
that we've created
Hollow minds can't heed
the tales related
To us
Finding truth in
what became a lie
that made you cry
And how long could a vision last?

I never believed in wishing stars
So maybe that's why
I couldn't get that far:
Where you are
Being who I am
It's hard for me
To hold on so loosely
Fearing that your slip
will make me fall
Into the wall
Crashing through the barrier
that protects us all.

I'm blindfolded
I won't see where I'm going
Maybe on doomsday
The world will change
When everyone sees the light.

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

this is really aawsome beautifully pieace

[CircusNerd]

i love you shane ^_^ :D

[Bella]

This is such a great poem. It has really good flow. I especially liked the last stanza. You gave amazing writing skills.

[poetic soul]

the last stanza was jus awesome!
good job!

:)

Regards,
Poetic Soul

[surayne]

Your an amazing writer Shane.
Good piece.
=]

[W. Lynch]

I really like the flow and ends to each sentence. Good message too.

[Fallen_Immortal]

This is really pretty. I love the different visuals you use to convey one continued point. They all add up to the perfect feeling that explains all that... helplessness, I guess you could say.

Job well done. This is wonderful.